Category Archives: Second Term Feedback
Feedback Week 8
Flip the sea- light at the bottom would look good make the shadow more translucent make the shadow bigger- thicker/larger think about bright blue outlines for fish/ seaweed that will be in the world (also think about repeating some of … Continue reading
Week 6 Feedback
Good Progress- Time to start creating large chunks of animation Finish the storyboards to get a clear idea of the timing Maybe try to get a youtube video of the animation in progress so people can see how the shots … Continue reading
Feedback
Make the edge of the shadow blurred Play more with the shadow size, it could be bigger STORY: Play with the siren idea. Use sound to signify a siren idea- he could row toward the sound, and the sound could … Continue reading
Tutorial Feedback
Essentially, the mermaid movement and character has held be back and it shouldn’t be in the animation. It was suggested to maybe include a shadow character to fit in with the theme of the mermaid siren. I need to look … Continue reading
Practice Lecture & Feedback
Practice Lecturer Darren Garrett: Digital Artist/ Games Designer- worked on games for horrible histories, doctor who, captain america, iron man etc. Narrative Illustration is storytelling in different forms Take ideas to the client Pre-school games and animations can limit the … Continue reading
Week 1 Lecture, Week 2 Feedback
Practice Lecture- Dianne Smith: Works at the British Journal of Photography The each journal is focused on a theme When applying to be in a journal (or any medium) think about the institution and approach them with material they might … Continue reading