- Make the edge of the shadow blurred
- Play more with the shadow size, it could be bigger
- STORY: Play with the siren idea. Use sound to signify a siren idea- he could row toward the sound, and the sound could get louder. At its loudest, he could reach into the water (there could be fish and multiple shadows, which could allude to him grabbing a shadow or a fish) and fall in the water (this makes it not her fault). <<This bit will probably have to be the longest? Rowing, fish under the water etc could take a while, means underwater wont have to be as much. When he is underwater the sound should be muffled. In the end the shadow could push him toward the light, we don’t see him saved but it points to him being saved. The middle of the story is general what needs to be figured out.